What do you think of these lyrics?

Prosperity brings money and fame /Ice chains and earrings/ all the finer things/ but don’t get too caught up in tha game/ cuz materialism is material / what got u these things/ can easily be taken away/ feds tryna conceal ish / leavin us behind curtains /but imma tell u the importance of never givin up / never stop tryin / cuz faith provokes hope for those who need it / these lyrics are heart felt / strictly from the soul / feel these words / such ideas so conceptual / through a form of expression used to release the tensions played out in this life of mine / inspiring the minds of many alike / I often sit back / ponderin about what it takes to lead a better life / how we livin expresses our actions in a period of time / so imma be quick to instill these rhymes / from the ink of the pen used to write these rhymes / out leaks the blood through the flesh of mine / every rhyme has meanin / every word triggers a feelin